Coming to Conquer
I.Lonely, shattered is this landDon't even try to cross its bordersI never tried to understandYou and your silly ordersDon't search for mercy in my eyesDon't ask how or whyThey burned down the...
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Venus Hally,Scary scenario you have written within these words ...nicely done !!!
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The apocalypse never sounded so eloquent."I love being a writer, but I hate the paper work."
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Look at you, writing this awesome stuff Don't go away like that, you're missed. Enjoyed this
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This sounded like a song, very powerful. ~Mystic~ "How could this happen to meI made my mistakesIve got no where to runThe night goes onAs Im fading awayIm sick of this lifeI just wanna screamHow...
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thank you for commenting... I was actually trying to write something different from what I usually do.note: this does not say I wanna burn down the Kremlin or Moscow ( somebody told me it sounds like...
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I thought you are Czech?Great work, venus; keep 'em comingPete PeruJust one brief instant hereEven the finest stones begin to spliteven gold is tarnishedeven precious bird-plumesshrivel like a...
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I don't know as I would call anything you write usual. Isn't going into the unknown fun. It's the only way to get real spontanaity. And it doesn't really matter if anybody likes it, as long as you...
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Venus, A scary write and each line adds more of a power punch in the words.Wanda
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Pete Peru - yes, I'm a Czech... and my friend though this has something to do with 1968, like one man's revenge for all crimes of the empire... really, it is NOT.I've seen the nations rise and fall...
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